Class Feedback

Our feedback on our draft was mostly positive despite how bad we think it is. Everybody said that they liked the stop motion as it was effective however people have suggested it is a bit quick to start with. People also said that some of the shots aren't very clear and we should think about lighting and how steady the camera is which we already said we should think about. Most people said they liked the location and that it fits with the genre of the song, however they think that the outside shots are some times too long and that they don't fit so well. The lip syncing was said to be good also, we have decided for real filming to make Miles and Jo actually sing the song as it will benefit the lip syncing. One person said that they like the mise en scene and the use of the random props as they fit with the theme and genre of the song. Finally a few people said they couldn't relate to the narrative, thats because there isn't one!