Teacher feedback

a massive improvement on the first version. the video has a sense of style and makes much more sense. simplicity is everything here, the images match the music really well. i'm intrigued to find out what you are planning to use in the 2 brick wall sections. camerawork is appropriate to task, editing works very well - particularly in the stop motion (clothes swapping) sequence. lighting is a bit dodgy towards the final part of the video as i previously told you, but is good for the majority of the time. your 2 characters fit the genre of video (and music) really well and have enhanced your piece of work. the mise en scene is very simple and very effective. you have managed to communicate a real sense of purpose with this piece of work. this is in the level 3 band at the moment.