Hard to comment
Stop motion works well when it focuses on shoes/feet
The lip syncing is a success
The two characters look appropriate (styling is good)
Shots are framed well to start with
Elements in the garden look very unaecessary
Shots need to be framed tightly to avoid background clutter
Keep the mise-en-scene to a minimum - plain backgrounds work well. This would be in keeping with the aesthetics of the song
More close ups of the singers, and lip syncing needs to be perfect
Need to plan actions and behaviour of the characters
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